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It is not stated in the summary, but this is 'translation' (read 'mtl'), a bad one at that.
The whole story up until the point I reached is plain and relatively common.
All the characters (just a handful as of the point I dropped) have a very faulty reasoning/decision making.
The game premise makes little sense in both popularity scale as well as the game's scale itself. (I'm assuming it's a VN, story based RPG or similar game)
The flow of the story is all over the place.
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The flow of the story reads like an MTL, but if you can handle the English flaws then you will still enjoy the story itself. I overlook the grammar and enjoy the character development.
PS I think it is kinda dumb to point out this is a translation when the translator CLEARLY states this, at the end of the summary. [Yes it was there when the story first posted]
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