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The beginning was incredible, well written, exploring a part of the Dragon Ball universe that I've never seen in other fanfics... with a good and captivating evolution... then the work takes a completely confusing path after a passage of time, the The writing becomes lazy, battles become one-hit finishes, the MC's decisions don't make sense... A villain with no motivation, besides being evil.
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Quite nice so far. Most complaints would require me to spoil the story, and I don't want to do that. I would recommend it.
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The beginning didn't really appeal to me at first (because I was probably looking at something else) but for my taste, this fanfic exceeded my expectations. It doesn't make the protagonist an idiot, it doesn't make him a... super saiyan (not in the sense of transformation. If not in talent and thought) he took advantage of the simple. And although the power fruit thing is not my thing, I have to accept, that if it was real. it would only give you X amount of power until you get to a point too high for it. In other words, that you would come to have a power in which the profit from the fruit is no longer worth it.
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