The chapters are brief but packed with a lot of information. Sometimes, the pace feels fast, as if everything is happening quickly. However, I can't say it was bad.

There are a few things that are difficult to understand, though. For example, in one of the latest chapter, different "qi" are mentioned, such as "Haneul qi" and "Hyun qi." It can be confusing, and I had to reread the entire paragraph to make sense of it. I'm not sure if it's intentional to make the terms difficult or not.

Overall, it's still quite good. I didn't find any grammatical errors, which is a positive. However, since the story has an LTRPG tag, I expected there to be a system, script, or AI involved, but up until chapter 12, there hasn't been any. That's a bit disappointing.

The story itself is good, and I recommend it to those looking for a casual read. If the author happens to see this review, I'd appreciate it if the chapters had more context. The transitions between scenarios are too quick, making it challenging to process.

Additionally, in the first few chapters, we learn that the main character, in his previous life, was someone with a disease but became one of the strongest people in the world. However, in this new life, he has a healthy body, even better than before, and has experience being one of the strongest. Yet, in 5 years, he only reached the first level of his old cultivation technique and the same level in a new one. I don't understand why. Was it intentional or not? If it was intentional, why? He could have suppressed his cultivation or masked it as one of the powerhouses from his earlier life. It should be possible, I think.

Furthermore, there are other aspects that need clarification. As a reader, I can fill in the gaps however I like, but it may backfire in the future. That's why I suggested adding more context and details to each chapter.

Overall, I would say to people reading this review that they should give the novel a try. On a scale of 1 to 10, I would rate it a 6 for the things it did right.

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