Nina Cascandra, the normal girl you know. Not so fast, she is not normal. In fact, she can read other people's minds. She is good at academics because of this ability. Her parents are worried about her because they think their daughter constantly gets bullied in her school. They didn't talk about it but it just misunderstands apparently. But, what happened is happened. To comfort her parent, she decided to enter the most famous school in the world for the princess, Yur L' Ebian Highschool, they felt at ease now, the things changed there.
Teacher with a twisted personality? Loly Gothic who called Genius? A perfect woman? They are all geniuses among geniuses. "Ah, and here I am constantly cheating on exams to be able to enter this classroom full of genius."
But, she has a mission from her teacher. "They are cute and wonderful people but they are not normal. Could you make them love you so you can be not normal too?"
The story suffers from badly translated light novel syndrome; that is to say that it is likely that the author's first language isn't English and it shows. The words themselves are spelt correctly for the most part, but they are used to make broken sentences that make no sense.
This harms the story because I as the reader am having trouble understanding what they are conveying; I am constantly in a state of confusion. This removes context, meaning and emotion from the story, while breaking immersion. The sentences also need more description in them to properly deliver any emotions and improve the understanding of the reader. Even the title of the story is in broken English.
My recommendation: the author needs a English editor.
Even if the author had a interesting premise for the story, it is ruined by poor execution. 2 stars.
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