Mind Reading in Love
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3.6 (14 ratings)
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- 34. In The LibraryNov 3, 2023
- 33. The Last Thing Her Friend Could DoNov 2, 2023
- 32. Come to AgreementNov 1, 2023
- 31. The Last Thing Gone WrongOct 31, 2023
- 30. This is not What I ImaginedOct 30, 2023
- 29. The King AnswerOct 29, 2023
- 28. The Queen ReasonOct 27, 2023
- 27. Linda The Noble (7)Oct 26, 2023
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- 22. Linda The Noble (2)Oct 20, 2023
- 21. Linda The NobleOct 19, 2023
- 20. Indencency (3)Oct 18, 2023
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The story suffers from badly translated light novel syndrome; that is to say that it is likely that the author's first language isn't English and it shows. The words themselves are spelt correctly for the most part, but they are used to make broken sentences that make no sense.
This harms the story because I as the reader am having trouble understanding what they are conveying; I am constantly in a state of confusion. This removes context, meaning and emotion from the story, while breaking immersion. The sentences also need more description in them to properly deliver any emotions and improve the understanding of the reader. Even the title of the story is in broken English.
My recommendation: the author needs a English editor.
Even if the author had a interesting premise for the story, it is ruined by poor execution. 2 stars.
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