Alastair Williams was an avid gamer at the age of 20 having played all manner of video games by this point. one stormy day alastair had finally finished fallout three with one hundred percent completion and went to grab another game from his collection called dragon quest 11 when a bolt of struck him out of nowhere killing him instantly. this is the story of how he was reborn in the world of dragon quest 11 with a system remarkably similar to in fallout.
This story will follow the story of dragon quest eleven before reaching into various other worlds such as one piece , bleach , marvel , dc , and maybe others. i only own my ocs and all credit for everything else goes to its respective owners.
Most authors who do what you did (grow a character to an OP level) end up not realizing that the easiest and best answer to continuing the story is to move from adventure and battles to slice of life and romance. This story progressed too fast, without proper character development and presentation, just battle after battle, goal after goal, power up after power up.
Even his wives were erased from history as backgrounds after the wedding, and the only parts they appear in are to say that they went shopping, accompanied him on the trip, or faced other women who showed interest in him (which is strange considering how much they pushed each other to join the harem). Even their children have only one description if they are boys or girls, I don't remember if they have names, but other than that, they are forgettable.
The remaining crew has only one name and one race. The spider I know had a role (cook), but the other 2 were just to make volume, because they did nothing but accompany them.
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