By Pewpewcachoo
I do not own anything from Marvel or Naruto. I just enjoy both universes.
So content warning first, this is a fanfic of hot steaming garbage. I hope you enjoy it. I will most likely put in bad words, fights, gore and maybe some smut. Or may
Most authors who do what you did (grow a character to an OP level) end up not realizing that the easiest and best answer to continuing the story is to move from adventure and battles to slice of life and romance. This story progressed too fast, without proper character development and presentation, just battle after battle, goal after goal, power up after power up.
Even his wives were erased from history as backgrounds after the wedding, and the only parts they appear in are to say that they went shopping, accompanied him on the trip, or faced other women who showed interest in him (which is strange considering how much they pushed each other to join the harem). Even their children have only one description if they are boys or girls, I don't remember if they have names, but other than that, they are forgettable.
The remaining crew has only one name and one race. The spider I know had a role (cook), but the other 2 were just to make volume, because they did nothing but accompany them.
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