It's good so far, though a bit awkward at times. Theres also a few places where a word or two is missing from a sentence, but it's still understandable.

You're trying to be mysterious, And it's working, but honestly, the world you've built reminds me heavily of the Manga/Anime Shimoneta. 

That's not a criticism, it's a compliment. Honestly, you've got me hooked, and if the quality maintains the same level, its going to be great.

Keep up the good work.

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Right off the bat we're thrown into an interesting world with life like character with clear motivations, feelings, you name it.

I don't usually read this type of novel, but I'm intrigued by what the author has managed to create.

The story is good and the narrative style is smooth as well.

I would rate the characters 4/5 since they're really good but not quite perfect.

The chapter updates are stable and I'm really satisfied with this.

The only thing that could use an improvement is general grammar. But its pretty good and there are no obvious flaws. I'm simply saying this since I tend to focus a lot on grammar like I do in my novel.

Overall, an interesting read for those who like reading gender bender novels.

Happy writing!

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