Those aren't behaviors of an adult who have lived for 10 years in an apocalyptic world and had seen "the worse sides of humanity." She's acting like a naive child but some people called her a wise person. The adventure story might be okay but there's a lot of inconsistencies and plot holes for it to be a good story.

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Azranova

Status: c102

Sep 27, 2023

It feels unfair for the only review here to be so negative, so I felt compelled to leave one myself.

Do I think this story is perfect? No, but few are. The pace can be a bit inconsistent, and there are a few too many commas, but overall I've quite enjoyed the story thus far. There are times where Celia makes some questionable decisions, and puts a bizarre amount of trust into complete strangers, but in her defense she's in an unfamiliar world, and being in the body of a child is throwing off her rationality (she doesn't stay as a child for too long, in case that's a concern). Plus, if a stupid decision works out well, can you really call it stupid?

Anyway, I'd say give the story a try. It's cute, it's gay, and it has an interesting setting, with some fickle higher beings messing with the poor little mortals.

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Tilted_Axis

Status: chapter 18.

Dec 23, 2023

It's okay if you're looking for a light read, though I can't say I like how the author handled the MC's personality or the evolution system.

- The MC is supposed to be an English teacher who lived through the apocalypse and even built or helped build a base, yet they don't have the personality I'd expect whatsoever. Instead, if I were told the MC was a suburban teenager who was Isekaied at the onset of the apocalypse I'd be inclined to believe you.

- the evolution system:

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I can't understand the point of including an evolution system if the MC just becomes a human?? Not even a transformation ability that makes them look human, but an actual human...

Also apparently humans are an S-tier evolution, which is difficult to swallow in a fantasy setting. S-tier really seems like it should be the territory of things like high level demons or vampire royalty. I'd personally give humans a C or B at most.

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Ruti

Status: Volume 4. Chapter 4: Mena. (Chapter 305.)

Mar 18, 2024

The Story is a very good read if you can get past the early stages of the novel, since the first few chapters are a bit slow, and are mostly inconsequential to the later story (at least as far as I've read) as well as certain character personality design and how MC acts. First volume can be hard to read, if your used to the other novels on the site, although it gets much better after.

Furthermore, most things that can be considered "plot holes" or "personality issues that don't fit MC based off description" will be explained in later chapters properly.

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Although Celia is very trusting of others, that's just part of her nature, and also part of the story, as her wives actively notice it, and know that its an issue that needs to be dealt with eventually. Does not help that she became a god who's main thing is Lesbian Love, in a story where a god becomes more like their domain. (In Celia's case, even more trusting and forgiving, even to normally unforgiving things, as long as its a girl)

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Personally, I would recommend reading the authors other story's, if you do fully plan on reading the entirety of this story, as to get an idea of what to expect when reading the story

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Ultrabenosaurus

Status: chapter 4: bigger life soup.

Mar 17, 2024

What a rubbish system. Despite literally having a feature to increase EXP based on level difference, it actively and intentionally punishes people for succeeding in difficult challenges such as defeating creatures more than a couple levels above their own. What kind of 1984 doublethink cognitive dissonance bullsh*t is this?

The author could easily have made it that defeating something with such a big level difference is not possible. Instead it's easy, but you get actively punished for it. How does that make sense or seem interesting to read?

Now there's no incentive or reason to try anything cool, to bother fighting strong things, or attempt anything interesting or exceptional; conform to slow, boring progression within your own level range or get kicked in the balls.

I can't imagine what a dull isekai this will be with such a limiting, anti-helpful System.

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