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Tldr: Good romance story, sadly turned smutty porn.
Great start. It's a story where MC was thrown inside anime+hentai universe, there are also other parts from korean manhwas and anime movies. But you don't need to watch the anime to understand the story because it doesn't follow any anime plot at all, you just have to know the basic personalities of characters (I didn't watch dressup darling and I only read beginning chapter of the komi-san manga but I don't think I miss anything)
It was very fun story and not boring at all and filled with ideas, it also has some quite clever comedy. But while the story started as a wholesome romance-comedy-harem story, after the MC had his first-s*x it turned into a fullblown smut story. It's not a bad per se but the essence of the book changes completely, the action was almost gone it was all about s*x, f*ck and full of nudity.
I don't dislike s*x scenes when I read novels but too much of it is bad and especially when it ruins the essence of the story. It's very disappointing to see this story degraded into a full smut. The story basically having whole chapter s*x scenes every 2 chapters some scenes even last for four continuous chapters, it just keeps a repetitive cycle to no end.
I guess author run out of ideas so he just keeps writing p*rn chapters to fill. It's a real shame. For me this story is quite enjoyable but isn't worth sticking to.
PS: Read this if you want Smut story with a long buildup.
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So, I read the first 30 chapters, and I must say that the novel very impressive, despite the generic start at the beginning.
The story improves chapter by chapter, and the MC is developing alongside his family & friends.
Now, we know this story is too f generic, considering he has a f system & the Author is watching a over the protagonists. But hear me out boys.
MC is not really overpowered. Doesn’t have an OP system. And although the Author is there, he doesn’t really get involved unless it’s necessary or acts like a bro towards the MC. Therefore, there is nothing to be afraid of, in this novel. The Author isn’t planning to make him OP. The Author is planning for the MC to be good at doing the things he puts hard work into. And that’s really amazing.
I think this novel has potential. A lot of potential for development. Nevertheless, if you mix too many fruits together, you get a mixed drink, which usually ruins the flavor.
So, I am trying to say that mixing so many worlds together can have some bad results. But again, the modern day setting kind of balanced the story very well. At least in a modern day setting you have laws & order, unlike a medieval fantasy when everyone & everything is fuc ed up.
Anyway, look forward to novel, considering it has Alpha male vibes.
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It’s just weirdly perfect stuff you writing here, dear author. Some unique way of connecting autor/god/inhead buddy with MC is just awesome, +plot is pretty balanced in my humble opinion👌🍉. &Nbsp;MC is not a SIMP, nor a scumbag, he’s just nice and cool overall
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Peak.
Great story, great written characters, great MC, great best friend (author, the one in the story), great pacing, great upload schedule, great everything.
Only problem is the grammar and spelling, but that’s getting better with every chapter. Maybe author should go back and fix the first 20-ish chapters, does are definitely the worst offenders of English grammar.
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Its a pretty good read so far. Really like the MC and the interactions he has with the other characters.
The pacing is a bit slow but its not terrible by any means.
Few points I think need improving would be more side characters and probably less time in MC's head as sometimes you have chapters of him just repeating his thoughts from several chapters prior.
And just a request for the auther, please bring back his first love, IMO she did not actually do the deed and is still redeemable.
But with all that said I will stick around for any new chapters.
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I read the novel. I had some laughs. I like it. MC Good. +1 for realism and personality. Go on webnovel I laugh. Good author.
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