By BrokenDoll
Laurus is a centuries old angel, that becomes wrapped up in the machinations of hell and changed utterly. Transformed into a woman she is forced not just to deal with the depravity of hell but with the schemes of a demon lord while she struggles f
It was great up to the 23 chapter but then it fall's off a very large cliff to me but if you like the story then all the power to you.
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Initially, the story was engaging, but things took an unexpected turn around Chapter 23. It's puzzling why the author opted for a complete reset, diverging from the original storyline rather than addressing its flaws and fixing them. While the narrative started off light-hearted, the sudden shift towards seriousness felt disjointed. Additionally, the author's reluctance to refine certain aspects, such as the naming conventions, before the reset, result in further inconsistencies in the writing style after the reset. Currently, the story is indefinitely on hiatus. Perhaps, in the future, I'll draw inspiration from the initial segments to write a personal story or experiment with the concept alongside AIbot technology, as it was an interesting idea. Hopefully, these insights prove beneficial should the author decide to return to writing.
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