Ok bro, this is already becoming a serious problem so there is a need to speak out.
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I'm LITERALLY addicted to this story, 30 minutes an hour thinking about it, reloading pages like crazy when I have free time and the end of the chapter becomes torture... Congratulations, your skills have evolved in a gratifying way, for me as a reader.
A group of rookie adventurers enter an ancient tomb in the hopes finding treasure
Within they found something priceless but it is not something they expected
Within lay an egg that held a species that existed since life began
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Ok bro, this is already becoming a serious problem so there is a need to speak out.
.
.
.
I'm LITERALLY addicted to this story, 30 minutes an hour thinking about it, reloading pages like crazy when I have free time and the end of the chapter becomes torture... Congratulations, your skills have evolved in a gratifying way, for me as a reader.
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Welp, it's 20 chapters-ish in now and I can confidently say the rewrite went in a much more sustainable direction than the first one
And is all the better off for it, this one is one to keep an eye on.
Gets a solid recommendation from me
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