Daniel was just your usual daily guy but one typical day he was hit by a car he thought it was just the end but was it really?
Anyway, this is my first novel so don't expect good grammar or vocabs, in fact, I don't even know what to be expected when writing a novel so if you don't like a novel written by me just don't read it and I can't promise this novel is up to your liking so don't read it if you don't like it.
[Using the translator]
I'm loving it so far, the only complaint is just that Mc's personality seems to change in the first 13 Caps, but nothing that an edition solves...
From Cap 14 onwards, will you use memory loss as his as a means of building a personality?
And please, if he's going to use a weapon, let it be a spear the main weapon. It's always the sword that MCs use.
Continue with the story, it has good potential.
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It has a good plot and has still potential for more. Will strongly recommend to read and give it a try
Just need to upload fast
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