Interesting, but way too edgy and too much crying. And like every goddamn story on this site, he had TWO main love interests so far and both of them are the yandere sort.

Why do authors always need to make more than one love interest and make them so stabby?? And of course we all know he's going to end up with both of them.

These and a bunch of other little things have annoyed me from loving this to hating it.

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This could be a really good story, however it is plaged by the standard fanfiction problems listed below.

1: author basically a converted a side character into a self insert. Which sadly automatically means he is competent, OP and liked by everyone (even the villans) a Mary Sue basically.

2: To large a harem that makes no sense, while composed of closest available women. It feels like the MC is in heat.

3: no variation from the main plot makes this boring + the MC knows the future makes this worse

4: power creep: all interesting side characters are way too weak to help and hardly matter

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One of the best bnha fics I've read in a while, the author really got a nice idea going!! Although at some times I feel like the MC kaminari is kinda 2d at an emotional standpoint either screaming like a raging maniac who needs a hug to big bro who is a walking talking moral compass (nothing bad with his character just make him a little more human and a little less "Must say something moral and upright every second sentence") tho it's not all bad since he still has a decent amount of eq

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Honestly one of the better written storys ive seen on hear and I enjoy the premis keep up the great work (chap 23)

Edit (chap168/165) : well what a ride and well I have to say congrats, honestly I still belive this is one of the better made storys ive ever read, believable characters (sometimes the girls fall in love a biiit to fast but nothing worse than other storys and they still are different people and not dolls) great development of his powers and lastly great storyline. I think you should tone down the loss a bit as balance is needed and most of the happy scenes are always directly next to a depressing scene and whilst the contrast is good variety in writing is better.

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The protagonist is pretty wholesome and the story has a nice flow. 

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This story started out really well. Some grammar issues here and there, but for a fanfic it has been really good. Then a harem was introduced and it still maintained its original charm. 

However, I do not like his personality anymore. This story makes it seem like him being in a consensual relationship with multiple people will ruin his life and career. It will ruin the careers of everyone in the relationship. He gives up on his love and turns into a completely pathetic MC blushing about even the conversation of romance. Then a teacher uses a quirk on him, while he is in the middle of abandoning the harem. Then the teacher has a forced conversation with the girls about their feelings. It’s just all very frustrating. I gave it two more chapters to clear up and it was very unsatisfactory. He still thought of abandoning them AFTER revealing he read couples therapy books and his mother was a therapist for relationships. It’s sad and pathetic. I get he feels unworthy of love, but damn he turned into a confusing, pathetic character with a quickness. 

PS He should have actually fought for the girls, especially if he believed they were in “danger” of their futures being bad. He should have beat the sh*t out of the teacher that used their quirk on him. 

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Follow the adventures of our lovable extremely OP emotional wreck that blasts villains in 1 paragraph and hugs with or cries with (or both at once) with almsot every girl in 1A for 10 chapters straight.

Everyone loves him, he's flawless in every way except he 'trains too hard', cries a bit and just 'can't pick a girl' (aka excuse to have a harem) which he is permanently feeling guilty about

Basically a well written self insert MHA based harem romance story with periodic action and surprisingly excellent characters

Good read with a great take on Kaminari but the sappy romance is like diving: keep going until you start running out of air, then stop immediately. It only gets deeper

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The novel is great and the author is putting in his effort. To say without spoiling much:

I don't know how the story will be in the future, since  expectations and demands from fans can make things difficult HOWEVER... even if that were the case I would still recommend people to read until the current  chapter 109.I have enjoyed it very much so far.
7 bananas/7 bananas
perfect score

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ONE OF THE BEST FAN-FICTIONS YOU WILL READ!!!!!

Its hard to fill you with all the reasons you should put this in your library and favorite the chapters... so I will keep it simple. 1 The MC is as strong as the canon MC. 2 He has flaws a lot of flaws, and this makes for a great hero. 3 The character development for the MC, heroins, and sidekicks are top notch. 4 The romance/harem are highly developed and rewarding. I could go on and on but if you miss this you will have regrets in your life... LOLOL. Thank you author for this great story!

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It’s pretty good! The author did a lot of research so he could use Kaminari’s quirk in clever scifi-ish ways that are really satisfying to read. A bit cheesy (?) if that’s the right word, and somewhat feels like the plot is rushed, but the author’s having fun and I can really tell! The romance feels a little repetitive up to ch71, but the partners are fun. 

I’d say the most fun part for me about this fic is the definitely the creative use of Kaminari’s quirk. I recommend you give it a shot if you like things like that!

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