Interesting, but way too edgy and too much crying. And like every goddamn story on this site, he had TWO main love interests so far and both of them are the yandere sort.

Why do authors always need to make more than one love interest and make them so stabby?? And of course we all know he's going to end up with both of them.

These and a bunch of other little things have annoyed me from loving this to hating it.

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Coheed27

Status: c152

Aug 12, 2021

This story started out really well. Some grammar issues here and there, but for a fanfic it has been really good. Then a harem was introduced and it still maintained its original charm.

However, I do not like his personality anymore. This story makes it seem like him being in a consensual relationship with multiple people will ruin his life and career. It will ruin the careers of everyone in the relationship. He gives up on his love and turns into a completely pathetic MC blushing about even the conversation of romance. Then a teacher uses a quirk on him, while he is in the middle of abandoning the harem. Then the teacher has a forced conversation with the girls about their feelings. It’s just all very frustrating. I gave it two more chapters to clear up and it was very unsatisfactory. He still thought of abandoning them AFTER revealing he read couples therapy books and his mother was a therapist for relationships. It’s sad and pathetic. I get he feels unworthy of love, but damn he turned into a confusing, pathetic character with a quickness.

PS He should have actually fought for the girls, especially if he believed they were in “danger” of their futures being bad. He should have beat the sh*t out of the teacher that used their quirk on him.

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Myxir

Status: chapter 99

Aug 4, 2021

This could be a really good story, however it is plaged by the standard fanfiction problems listed below.

1: author basically a converted a side character into a self insert. Which sadly automatically means he is competent, OP and liked by everyone (even the villans) a Mary Sue basically.

2: To large a harem that makes no sense, while composed of closest available women. It feels like the MC is in heat.

3: no variation from the main plot makes this boring + the MC knows the future makes this worse

4: power creep: all interesting side characters are way too weak to help and hardly matter

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Mukson

Status: chapter 147. first relationship

Aug 5, 2021

Follow the adventures of our lovable extremely OP emotional wreck that blasts villains in 1 paragraph and hugs with or cries with (or both at once) with almsot every girl in 1A for 10 chapters straight.

Everyone loves him, he's flawless in every way except he 'trains too hard', cries a bit and just 'can't pick a girl' (aka excuse to have a harem) which he is permanently feeling guilty about

Basically a well written self insert MHA based harem romance story with periodic action and surprisingly excellent characters

Good read with a great take on Kaminari but the sappy romance is like diving: keep going until you start running out of air, then stop immediately. It only gets deeper

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Silver_Bullet

Status: c89

Sep 3, 2021

First, I dont like Harems except if they don't break my rules for harems and some rules for novels, wich im not gonna write now. At first, even with a little over-sentimentality, I liked the novel, but this novel broke my Harems rules.

1- The world has to approve the harems.

2- Girls or boys, in the case of reverse harems, should not be useless adornments and without personality for the MC.

3- there has to be a "trigger" for every love interest who ended with the MC.

4- the new member has to be approved by the other members (but this is little tricky, because it depends on whether the personalities of the members and the situation coincide with the way they approve or disapprove the new member).

5- The possible members of the harem they have to have personality.

6- The MC dont have to be a jerk.

This novel even if can pass the personalitys of the characters of the original work, wich is good, it broke my first rule of the aprovval from the world with (from here and on there are some spoilers)

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Jiro and Momo, but I can forgive it because this novel pass the rules from 2 to 5 and because it would be weird but no impossible in this kind of setting, but in the moment when I saw Miina starting to becoming too part of the harem then I say Sht, this dont match anymore, then I pass some chapters to confirm my suspictions aaand Sht.

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Others draw backs are the cringey parts and the centralization of the world around the MC, wich almost all novel tends to this but some novels brake the balance and it ends with a bad novel.

So, if you still want to read this novel then serve your self, but this novel isnt my taste and im a little picky with what I read.

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GreenKazoo

Status: c72

Jun 29, 2021

One of the best bnha fics I've read in a while, the author really got a nice idea going!! Although at some times I feel like the MC kaminari is kinda 2d at an emotional standpoint either screaming like a raging maniac who needs a hug to big bro who is a walking talking moral compass (nothing bad with his character just make him a little more human and a little less "Must say something moral and upright every second sentence") tho it's not all bad since he still has a decent amount of eq

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even after almost frying his brain multiple times

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R_E_A_D_E_R

Status: chapter 23. class president

Jun 28, 2021

Honestly one of the better written storys ive seen on hear and I enjoy the premis keep up the great work (chap 23)

Edit (chap168/165) : well what a ride and well I have to say congrats, honestly I still belive this is one of the better made storys ive ever read, believable characters (sometimes the girls fall in love a biiit to fast but nothing worse than other storys and they still are different people and not dolls) great development of his powers and lastly great storyline. I think you should tone down the loss a bit as balance is needed and most of the happy scenes are always directly next to a depressing scene and whilst the contrast is good variety in writing is better.

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Runco

Status: chapter 18. team a vs. team...

Jun 27, 2021

The protagonist is pretty wholesome and the story has a nice flow.

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TwigTree

Status: chapter 109. conference

Jul 16, 2021

The novel is great and the author is putting in his effort. To say without spoiling much:

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+The story follows the line of the canon but with interesting modifications.
+You can read a few chapters and already learn if you like the style since it gets into motion pretty fast
+The grammar is good and if there is a typo it gets corrected soon after notifying.
+There is romance.
-Can be a bit cringey for people who dislike tears (I dont care)

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I don't know how the story will be in the future, since expectations and demands from fans can make things difficult HOWEVER... even if that were the case I would still recommend people to read until the current chapter 109.I have enjoyed it very much so far.
7 bananas/7 bananas
perfect score

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Harem-Fan

Status: chapter 165. I am a dad?

Jul 15, 2021

ONE OF THE BEST FAN-FICTIONS YOU WILL READ!!!!!

Its hard to fill you with all the reasons you should put this in your library and favorite the chapters... so I will keep it simple. 1 The MC is as strong as the canon MC. 2 He has flaws a lot of flaws, and this makes for a great hero. 3 The character development for the MC, heroins, and sidekicks are top notch. 4 The romance/harem are highly developed and rewarding. I could go on and on but if you miss this you will have regrets in your life... LOLOL. Thank you author for this great story!

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