I died by the mistake of god, as a compensation in my second life I got reincarnated in the novel I read last night with immense powers,As family of my favourite character my grandfather.The most powerful person in the entire kingdom whom the king want to remove. I don't want his end like original story, but I have commoners blood will I be able to win favour of my grandfather?With the ultimate goal to rule the nation witness journey of businessman.
By author : sam
The author brainstormed a story and wrote it's first raw at the same time. After that he simply took the text and plugged it here. 2/5
There are no paragraphs, lots of grammar mistakes and the dialogues are cramped in the paragraph.
Story has good potential but needs a complete rewrite from scratch, 2/5.
If you think my review is harsh, just read ch1 & 2 and you'll get it.
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I will recommend this one. The start is good. And the plot seems to be good to.😊
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