The author brainstormed a story and wrote it's first raw at the same time. After that he simply took the text and plugged it here. 2/5
There are no paragraphs, lots of grammar mistakes and the dialogues are cramped in the paragraph.
Story has good potential but needs a complete rewrite from scratch, 2/5.
If you think my review is harsh, just read ch1 & 2 and you'll get it.
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I will recommend this one. The start is good. And the plot seems to be good to.😊
The author brainstormed a story and wrote it's first raw at the same time. After that he simply took the text and plugged it here. 2/5
There are no paragraphs, lots of grammar mistakes and the dialogues are cramped in the paragraph.
Story has good potential but needs a complete rewrite from scratch, 2/5.
If you think my review is harsh, just read ch1 & 2 and you'll get it.
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I will recommend this one. The start is good. And the plot seems to be good to.😊
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