When his body was destroyed
His soul was pulled,
A body was forged using fallen foes.
Thus the greatest vessel ever existed was created to place that soul.
Will he be able to reach the greatest height that he must reach?
To find out about the mysteries of the universe that were kept hidden?
(A/N:I re-edited the first ten chapters, will be good to receive some feedbacks : ) )
From chapter 11 onwards I will try to post larger chapter.
(A/N: I Will be posting my work on Royal Road and Scribble hub)
(A/N : you can skip the first 19 chapters as it wont make any difference as its mostly about basic details )
Edit: This is now outdated. The writer really did a big face lift on this one and even edited the old chapters. It seems they just needed the right tools. It seems pretty promising though I will say that the premise might be a bit overused or raw for some if this gets popular enough for a publication route after some professional editing.
That said I'll leave my old review below if just for the sake of clarity.
Old review;
It's really rough syntax wise with the grammar, spelling, and formatting just being bad. The chapter length is also far too short at about five or six-minute reads, but it has a lot of potential if the writer puts in the work to edit this up and rewrite it. It has a good premise and that makes it interesting. With that, I give this a preliminary five-star review. Keep at it, writer! You can do it. ?
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