"I wish I got isekaied with awesome superpowers and system for at least once," said a man. A God happened to hear it and waved his hands with a small amusing smile on his lips and a small whisper of words "let's see you keep it"
I can't understand this beginning. It says lucky isekai, but there is nothing directing towards luck or unlucky. The entire first page is world development.
Not qualified but still. Make the first page your best page. Don't show too much world development at first. Show something that will attract our attention at once. You will have plenty of time to know the world once we are interested in story. But first page is not the right place.
I woke up naked and all alone in a summoning circle, the only clue to my past is a demon summoning book and the hazy memories of a world very different from the one I find myself in now. I should probably be more concerned with the changes that ha
Hello~! My name was — well, it doesn’t really matter, my name is… no, wait, that doesn’t matter either… hrm. Okay. Here’s what does matter.
I died and was reincarnated into an eroge. You know, a porn
Brandy is finally able to start her Pokémon adventure!
But in a world where Pokémon are all monster girls with something extra swinging between the legs, becoming a Trainer is much more physically challenging.
Learning to balance h
A 27-year-old American named Ryan was doing his usual morning run through a forest in the United States Midwest when he was attacked by a magical orb that transported him to another world. While in this other World, he finds himself captured by a
I was just looking for a second job to supplement my income. I was not expecting a dramatic reveal of previously-unknown demonic heritage. I also wasn’t expecting to have to deal with that question that has been nagging me for years.
I can't understand this beginning. It says lucky isekai, but there is nothing directing towards luck or unlucky. The entire first page is world development.
Not qualified but still. Make the first page your best page. Don't show too much world development at first. Show something that will attract our attention at once. You will have plenty of time to know the world once we are interested in story. But first page is not the right place.
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