"I wish I got isekaied with awesome superpowers and system for at least once," said a man. A God happened to hear it and waved his hands with a small amusing smile on his lips and a small whisper of words "let's see you keep it"
I can't understand this beginning. It says lucky isekai, but there is nothing directing towards luck or unlucky. The entire first page is world development.
Not qualified but still. Make the first page your best page. Don't show too much world development at first. Show something that will attract our attention at once. You will have plenty of time to know the world once we are interested in story. But first page is not the right place.
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This novel has Tsundere, Yandere, Glasses Girl, Slut, Kuudere, Tall Girl, Tanned, Tomboy, MILF, Dark-Skinned, and lots more!!
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Rick a Man in depression is Challenged by his daughter to become more powerful than her within a year on the Worlds first VRMMORPG.
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I can't understand this beginning. It says lucky isekai, but there is nothing directing towards luck or unlucky. The entire first page is world development.
Not qualified but still. Make the first page your best page. Don't show too much world development at first. Show something that will attract our attention at once. You will have plenty of time to know the world once we are interested in story. But first page is not the right place.
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