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I can't understand this beginning. It says lucky isekai, but there is nothing directing towards luck or unlucky. The entire first page is world development.
Not qualified but still. Make the first page your best page. Don't show too much world development at first. Show something that will attract our attention at once. You will have plenty of time to know the world once we are interested in story. But first page is not the right place.
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