Just noticed that this novel is finished, which makes me feel obliged to leave a review here.

Writing Quality: 3/5

The author has been active for several years now, and has written several thousand chapters, which makes you think that writing should be clean and without many mistakes, right?

Unfortunately not here. Despite all the experience, there are still some mistakes in most of the chapters. Not only that, but the character interactions often don't feel smooth.

Still, the novel is quite readable.

Stability of Updates: 5/5

What else can I say about this? Daily uploads, which is definitely one of the strengths of this novel.

Story Development: 4/5

As a fanfic, the author has the advantage that a rough storyline is already given. The author often uses his OC well.

Unfortunately, the plot sometimes feels forced by the system.

Character Design 3/5

Again, as above, the author has the advantage of using existing characters. The OCs are okay, but not completely fleshed out.

The fact that characters are already predefined cannot only have advantages, as the author should/must keep their personalities as in the original.

Unfortunately, he often fails to do so.

World Background 4/5

Here too, the author has a certain basic framework because of the world jumps.

What bothers me here, are the many power systems that collide.

I would like to see a work from the author, in which he focuses on one world / power system.

Your lovely SupremeLokiLN

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