The story is still young as of writing this review, only 9 chapters have been uploaded, but it holds promise.
The world building is set up pretty clearly and well, and looking forward to it being expanded on later. The dynamic between the summoned heroes and the summoners seems pretty common, but the protagonist willingly choosing to go against the summoners instead of being kicked out or scorned for something as arbitrary as her class or skills is a much welcome twist to the genre that's been plagued by the typical "They Betrayed Me So I Became Stronger" trope, and the MC doesn't seem to be someone that's going to be overpowered for no reason and instead someone supported by pre-existing fractions that were there before she was summoned.
The story is a bit lacking in logic in some places and is quite okay in some places but overall quite boring so far pretty much the protagonist has everything she wants her way with 0 resistance also I find action quite lacking half the time in the way it's written though I would say protagonist and her slave interactions is pretty okay though her interaction with other side characters lacks earned love for protagonist or like of her (pretty much stuff is happening too fast on that end) (would be nice if there were more descriptions)
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protagonist (and somehow slave who is supposedly weak and let me mention that protagonist and her slave are level 1) being able to beat up guild receptionist does not make any sense and shows quite flawed logic in the way it's written so in that logic I will be expecting flawed logic going forward
It begins as a usual isekai story.
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Of course, there must be some kind of cheat to make up for it. It’s that kind of story.
And my cheat is… being a s
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What happens when a man gets transported into a foreign world filled with magic?
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The story is still young as of writing this review, only 9 chapters have been uploaded, but it holds promise.
The world building is set up pretty clearly and well, and looking forward to it being expanded on later. The dynamic between the summoned heroes and the summoners seems pretty common, but the protagonist willingly choosing to go against the summoners instead of being kicked out or scorned for something as arbitrary as her class or skills is a much welcome twist to the genre that's been plagued by the typical "They Betrayed Me So I Became Stronger" trope, and the MC doesn't seem to be someone that's going to be overpowered for no reason and instead someone supported by pre-existing fractions that were there before she was summoned.
All in all, looking forward to more.
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The plot so far is decent but everything is just a bit too easy for the protagonist.
The grammar is hard to understand at times, has several grammatical errors, and is lacking in word choices.
Plot good. Grammer poor.
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The story is a bit lacking in logic in some places and is quite okay in some places but overall quite boring so far pretty much the protagonist has everything she wants her way with 0 resistance also I find action quite lacking half the time in the way it's written though I would say protagonist and her slave interactions is pretty okay though her interaction with other side characters lacks earned love for protagonist or like of her (pretty much stuff is happening too fast on that end) (would be nice if there were more descriptions)
protagonist (and somehow slave who is supposedly weak and let me mention that protagonist and her slave are level 1) being able to beat up guild receptionist does not make any sense and shows quite flawed logic in the way it's written so in that logic I will be expecting flawed logic going forward
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