So yea, this story is written like a script, the lines from each character is preceded by their name, eg. [Tohru: "Now Miss Kobayashi's introduced me to her parents, I've practically claimed her heart!"] It goes as far as to constantly mention the 'camera's' POV and what it's doing (zooming in, turning to this turning to that etc.)
Personally, I don't like this kind of writing, because it feels like everything keeps stopping to specify a perspective which is most often not necessary in the case of the 'camera' or better when written such that each character's name doesn't need to proceed their words for you to know who's talking. It breaks the flow of the story for me, so I'm dropping rather early for this reason.
That said, I'm well aware that there are people who either don't mind or prefer it this way, so if that's you, then you might like this story.
Would you take the deal? Live your wildest fantasies at the cost of orchestrating the most significant prison break ever conceived? Spanning six worlds, millions of years, and more violence than you can shake a stick at. Everyone wants freedom. Ev
Little Catia hadn’t decided on what she wanted out of life yet. She was only six years old afterall! But when her mother takes her on a trip to Japan, she sees the Symbol of Peace, All Might!
After that she has a purpose.
She has
So yea, this story is written like a script, the lines from each character is preceded by their name, eg. [Tohru: "Now Miss Kobayashi's introduced me to her parents, I've practically claimed her heart!"] It goes as far as to constantly mention the 'camera's' POV and what it's doing (zooming in, turning to this turning to that etc.)
Personally, I don't like this kind of writing, because it feels like everything keeps stopping to specify a perspective which is most often not necessary in the case of the 'camera' or better when written such that each character's name doesn't need to proceed their words for you to know who's talking. It breaks the flow of the story for me, so I'm dropping rather early for this reason.
That said, I'm well aware that there are people who either don't mind or prefer it this way, so if that's you, then you might like this story.
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