On the grammar side, expect sentences to last for entire paragraphs.
On the story side, a character will introduce their special abilities by using them. This doesn't sound that bad at first, but it ruins the feeling of challenge when your character suddenly snaps his fingers and all the cameras are down.
Grammar and story are both extremely lacking.
On the grammar side, expect sentences to last for entire paragraphs.
On the story side, a character will introduce their special abilities by using them. This doesn't sound that bad at first, but it ruins the feeling of challenge when your character suddenly snaps his fingers and all the cameras are down.
Definitely not what I expected out of this story.
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