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Chapter 17: A It’s time to part ways, You’re part of our Family nowAug 15, 2020
Chapter 16: A Nightmare that should not HappenAug 14, 2020
Chapter 16: A Nightmare?Aug 13, 2020
Extra: The Arrival of the PrisonerAug 12, 2020
Chapter 15: The Pain you won’t UnderstandAug 12, 2020
Chapter 14: Soaring FistsAug 10, 2020
Chapter 14: Teleported once againAug 8, 2020
Extra: Prisoner EscapedAug 7, 2020
Chapter 13: The Fallen Kingdom… The Cry Baby Princess…Aug 7, 2020
Chapter 12: Sword at the Neck, The King in Rage DarknessAug 6, 2020
Chapter 11: The Promise that Fall Apart (Part 2)Aug 5, 2020
Chapter 10: The Promise that Fall Apart (Part 1)Aug 4, 2020
Chapter 9: The Late VisitAug 3, 2020
Extra : Princess of the Spiritual SwordAug 3, 2020
Chapter 8: First Flames of Terror, A pet for a ReasonAug 2, 2020

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Status: Chapter 1: The Girl of the...

Jul 29, 2020

Grammar and story are both extremely lacking.

On the grammar side, expect sentences to last for entire paragraphs.

On the story side, a character will introduce their special abilities by using them. This doesn't sound that bad at first, but it ruins the feeling of challenge when your character suddenly snaps his fingers and all the cameras are down.

Definitely not what I expected out of this story.

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