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MC meets a female
Female: Oh my god I want that d*ck.
Literally the entire novel. None of these women have any say, none of them act like real people. All just toys for the MC.
MC literally rapes every women he meets because the writer doesn't understand that forcing women to feel Horney through chemicals is no different then drugging them with rufies.
Not a single women in his harem had any choice to be with him. Which is f**king sad that THAT is what the writer says the MC wants. F**king pathetic. Not the MC, the writer.
Also the writer forgets a lot of sh*t and keeps on trucking on while forgetting what they just make the MC promise or what technically is actually going on.
For example, everything after the fruit of troubles is technically just an illusion, It's not real. And the writer seems to forget this entirely and just keep going as if the MC didn't just enter an entire world spanning hallucination meant to temper him through endless killing / deaths. No way to leave it willingly was ever explained or stated, the only way to leave was hinted at some threshold you had to exceed after dieing a crap tone of times. But even my saying that is giving the writer too much credit. So the writer literally hypes up this fruit for over 20+ chapters only to have it all fall flat on it's face the instant he gets it and entirely forgets what he literally wrote just 1 paragraph ago and has the MC just f**king go about is day like nothing happened.
He only barely seems aware of what he wrote and has the MC use it for learning how to cultivate but never does it in the way they'd built it up for or previously explained.
f**king saaaadddddd!
And this is just the most recent sin in a long line that plagues this novel right from the start.
Still, Neat story.
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Love it dont stop pls :3
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I like it I hope you can keep the novel going
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I like it so far I hope you keep going ignore the ratings for know and release more please.
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