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Total Views (Chapters): | 23,230 |
Average Views: | 1,162 |
Word Count: | 19,598 |
Average Words: | 980 |
Pages: | 72 |
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While the grammar is frankly not very good, to put it lightly, the story is there. While it isn't incredibly fleshed out, it has still scratched that special yandere itch so far. My only complaint is really the grammar. Also, use of punctuation is quite limited.
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The gramatic is fine. It the only thing fine in this story. Syntax is horrible, the morphology is non existent. Strange and unecessary use of japanese expression like "Umu Umu" or "fufu". If you are here for the s*x :
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My sword was high due to all pleasure my body was receiving Erica held my sword and started kissing me and I was shocked I can't figure out what happened and after god knows how much time I found Erica hugging me naked with a small patch of blood in the bed. [/Spoiler/]
It seems to be extremely hard to find a good yandere story
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