A human hero, and the leader of an multiracial coalition embarks on a quest to stop the war that has ravaged the world for so long.
However, through a twist of fate he must now live as an vampire loli in order to stop the war.
It's solid, if you found this based off the tags and thus dug into it, you shouldn't be disappointed based on what's out so far.
However, be aware that the grammar and dialogue is definitely spotty, though the author is making an active effort to revise errors when pointed out, so in time it should end up in a more polished state, so be patient on that front.
However beware that if you're not already invested in the subject matter, you're unlikely to be able to get past the shortcomings and the somewhat generic nature of the characters. It's definitely leaning into some of the tag-tropes, so if that's what you're here for, you've come to the right place, otherwise though, you might want to carry on looking.
The story isn't bad but the tags massively misrepresent the story in my opinion.
What I expected what a slice of life story about a former human struggling as a new formed vampire.
What the story so far seems to be more focused on murder mystery whodunit type thing while most slice of life stuff actually seems to be briefly mentioned and then skipped over.
Gender bender also seems a bit unreasonable
Spoiler
Considering MC was female in the first place.
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Not a bad story by any means, but I felt a bit decieved by the tags and expectation didn't match what I was reading.
The grammatical errors are prominent in the early chapters, but as the story progresses, the frequency of such errors also decreases. The balance between the lighthearted moments and the more serious moments that we have gotten in the story so far are well written.
I'm a bit disappointed in the story progress, every part of it seems that there wasn't enough time given to it, especially the major plot twists or reveals and whatnot. Though the story is moving at times and has good emotional parts in it, it seems that very quickly (usually in just a few chapters) the MC finds a way to either get over it quickly, or their problems resolve itself.
Also absolutely hate the fact that there's no harem tag. I wasn't expecting it, which consequently frustrated me at the obvious route it's going down in.
Other than that, this is a fairly good story which I've been enjoying so far. While there's my nitpicks of the emotional stuff and story, it's still done a lot better than other novels I've read. The characters are done really well and I've been liking them all so far. A fairly interesting plotline, with some really enjoyable moments too.
Overall it's impressive for someones first book, which I'm assuming here.
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It's solid, if you found this based off the tags and thus dug into it, you shouldn't be disappointed based on what's out so far.
However, be aware that the grammar and dialogue is definitely spotty, though the author is making an active effort to revise errors when pointed out, so in time it should end up in a more polished state, so be patient on that front.
However beware that if you're not already invested in the subject matter, you're unlikely to be able to get past the shortcomings and the somewhat generic nature of the characters. It's definitely leaning into some of the tag-tropes, so if that's what you're here for, you've come to the right place, otherwise though, you might want to carry on looking.
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The story isn't bad but the tags massively misrepresent the story in my opinion.
What I expected what a slice of life story about a former human struggling as a new formed vampire.
What the story so far seems to be more focused on murder mystery whodunit type thing while most slice of life stuff actually seems to be briefly mentioned and then skipped over.
Gender bender also seems a bit unreasonable
Considering MC was female in the first place.
Not a bad story by any means, but I felt a bit decieved by the tags and expectation didn't match what I was reading.
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I wouldn't call the work bad/terrible, neither good/great nor average. The problems primarily come down to there being no real genre covered:
Cute Genderbend Protag? Somewhat but very little explored.
Cute Slice of Life? There's too much intrigue.
Drama, Intrigue, Yuri Romance! Not really. Confusingly written. Not feeling it.
Overall it is not of the quality one may expect and may be only good for killing time. Personally I will be looking elsewhere.
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The story is enjoyable so far.
The grammatical errors are prominent in the early chapters, but as the story progresses, the frequency of such errors also decreases. The balance between the lighthearted moments and the more serious moments that we have gotten in the story so far are well written.
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I'm a bit disappointed in the story progress, every part of it seems that there wasn't enough time given to it, especially the major plot twists or reveals and whatnot. Though the story is moving at times and has good emotional parts in it, it seems that very quickly (usually in just a few chapters) the MC finds a way to either get over it quickly, or their problems resolve itself.
Also absolutely hate the fact that there's no harem tag. I wasn't expecting it, which consequently frustrated me at the obvious route it's going down in.
Other than that, this is a fairly good story which I've been enjoying so far. While there's my nitpicks of the emotional stuff and story, it's still done a lot better than other novels I've read. The characters are done really well and I've been liking them all so far. A fairly interesting plotline, with some really enjoyable moments too.
Overall it's impressive for someones first book, which I'm assuming here.
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