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Ch 3
Let me tell yaa, without being annoyed I never ever thought or ever never had loved a dense (Innocent) protagonist as much as this one... I mean, got hooked despite it having odd writing style.
Even went as far as to register, just for the sake of appreciating this work.
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Let me tell you... Preetttyy bad, overall it is very confusing and nothing is developed, just glanced over rapidly, barely sparing a glance to anything, everything is pretty 1 dimensional, that includes the powers and even the main character.
I don't actually hate this, just not my stuff, this review can work as a warning for people I guess, meh.
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Good evening everyone.
The writing and editing of the text is not the best, but it is a good story to read.
Some points to consider:
1st There's Yuri in the story, I didn't mind, but I know there are a lot of guys who are uncomfortable with that;
2nd It was not confirmed that the Protagonist ended up with a Harem, especially since he was a bit slow and too innocent;
[Editing point 2:
It was confirmed by the author that there is a high probability of Prota getting married to the Heroines in the end, he hasn't decided on the ending yet, but it's a hope for some degenerates like me who like a happy ending instead of the usual sh*t.]
3rd There are some signs of past relationships with secondary characters, mainly around Chapter 27 (there is no NTR, just a later relationship that the teacher had) ;
4th If you have a problem with the heroine's ease of falling in love, this isn't exactly your book, because most of them, as far as I've read, easily fall into Prota's good graces (they just don't get into a relationship because Prota is a little screwed up in the head).) ;
5th I don't know what I would add for a fifth point, but I recommend that you read it with the site's dark option, and for those who translate the site, the text will be very confusing with the translation in real time (better to copy the text and use Google Translate)
I think that's it, I liked it, but I think I'm dropping this story. I don't mind the slow development of the romance, but if he doesn't end up with a Harem at the end of the story, along with most of the girls he seduces, I won't come back. (Just kidding, I need to cool down first and collect myself, as soon as I do that, I'll try to read again and see if I can finish reading)
Note: But note that I wasn't joking about ending the affair with your Harem, because otherwise what's the point of putting the TAG on the work when it's Harem? Put Obscenity and Yuri that would be more honest with the reader. I would like him to end the story with Aoi (Teacher), Mary (Class Representative), Lilly (Emo) and Denna (Nurse), they are my favorite heroines.
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