Tianwu continent
Dong Empire , Lin family
Young teenager with dirty face inside a wood house all messy decadent on a wood bed.
The teen opened his eyes and look around
"What fuck!!!!!! What am i doing here?was i kidnapped?" Lin cheng thought
I try to get up but I suddenly felt pain all over my body.
"Ouch!"
I look down at my clothes is then that i realize that i was dressing like ancient chinese costume i was hoping that the one who kidnapped me doesnt have a weird fetish.
Knock! Knock!
"Lin cheng get out here waste!"
I hear a annoying male voice scream my name.
Suddenly a burst of pain again exploded but this time in my head.
I grab my head in pain and bunch of images
And information ran though my mind "shit!!!!!"
Apparently this was the legendary crosssing!!
Sir you need to keep uploading I'm addicted to this story. Although the English is not perfect but Story is really amazing. It contains everything it should have. A good story, a good 18+ with character progress is really good. So please continue uploading. Thank you.
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Some errors in the grammar, but is not that bad. If your bored and are looking to pass some time read it.
I also saw that the author writing skills are improving. So keep it buddy.
Easy summary
Slice of life ✔️
Xianxia ✔️
Op MC check ✔️
Likable MC ✔️
Not boring second dimensional characters ✔️
World Build and very well explained. ✔️&Nbsp;
Good R18 scenes ✔️
Coherent Romance ✔️
Grammars and spelling ×
To be honest was gonna rate it with 3 stars. But seeing how I like the MC personality and how down to earth he is. Instead of beeing your typical anti hero prick you won the 4 🌟.
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If you read this story prepare to feel like someone shat in your oatmeal. The worst part is you won't even feel like you were having a good day either since the orange juice was also expired.
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All this time I've been reading your novel, MC just bluffing having fun after that leaving like a child who can't take full responsibility for what he does, Boring Just showing off here and there, even stupid again MC doesn't take revenge for all the crimes that people " those around him were doing to him as if all those problems had evaporated into ashes and never happened, it was like a naive boy who was given power without understanding those things.
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