The writing in this as of the first few chapters is fairly bad. Each sentence is very poorly thought out and reads like bullets in a PowerPoint. None of the story comes organically and is sort of info. Dumped instead of presented in any sort of dynamic way.

I had a long day.

I was tired, so I went to bed.

Then fell asleep quickly.

I woke up the next day.

I felt well rested.

It just doesn't flow, like at all. It has oodles of simple sentences and very little character developement. On the plus side I did get the feeling that the writer knew quite a bit about Star Wars and enjoyed writing it. Just maybe not so much for others to enjoy reading as for a sort of organized daydream. 

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