It started with blurry visions.
Then they got clear.
My mother with her blond and black hair.
My father with his Legolas' loooong platinium long hair.
The pillow case wearer house-elf.
I’m in Harry Potter universe.
But in the wrong side.
How am I to stay alive, when I know he's coming back ?
My name is Draco Malfoy.
Pure-blood.
I’m a Slytherin.
And I will be a traitor...
They will hate me with all their Heart.
(Picture not from me, if it's yours and you want it down, message me.
All original characters and story are from J, K, Rowling)
Have you ever read machine translations of asian novels? This is similar.
The story seams good, though not very original. There are a few intrigues right from the start. The MC does not look OP. Adults are respectable and powerful. Everyone stays in character.
But it's hard to read. Story telling is constantly interrupted with fact sentences. Often you think that something has already happened only to realise that everything before this was just an intralude and it is only now that things are actually happening.
Direct speech isn't always obvious. Dialogues lack context. And many more.
Unless your brain can dissect the text and patch up a plausible story for you, don't read.
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Honestly good quality, I don't agree with the MC decisions half the time, but if I wanted to do so I would write it myself, 7/10 would recommend
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