The world where the MC reincarnated.
Still "?????" because I still can't think of what to call it. I will change it when I have the idea.
(Edited, December 26, 2021):
The world is known as "Constella." Created by unknown far back in tge beginning.
Anything mentioned that isrelated to Constella in story will be called 'Constellian.'
A City that prospered fast, as it is the centered place where merchants, investors, investors home and route from all over the continent.
The City is surrounded by a thick wall to prevent attacks from monsters outside the city, because th place is not only surrounded by kingdoms but also forest, which where fierce wild monsters inhabits.
The city have gone into advancement as years pass by. They are near to the tall buildings like what we see in Earth's major cities.
They have their Education system, Military and Adventurers Headquarters.
The city is divided into 4 divisions, 1st division are for Base of Army and Adventures Guild, and where the North Gate of the city is also located. 2nd division are where blacksmiths, weapon shops, food stalls, restaurants, tailor shop, clothings shop and many daily necessities, South Gate can be found here. Households and the West Gate is in 3rd division of the city, educational structures and East Gate is in 4th division.
Main Character's name before reincarnation.
A college student who had anemia, died because he lost consciousness for a brief moment, and his balance was so off that he trucked his head on a rock in the ground. That's the last thing he remembered.
Gender: Male
Age: 19
Birthdate: December 13, XxxX
Status: Deceased in Earth (Reincarnated to Another World)
[A/N: Not mentioned in the story, but for those who are curious, I put it here.]
System-A's Fragment that is named by the Main Character, a girl that is in spiritual form at the moment.
The voice in main character's head.
Member of System-A's Libraria container of Knowledge and Wisdom.
Age: Unknown
Birthdate: Unknown
Status: Active
A Divine being, considered as a God but is not a God.
Creator of System: Level, skills, class, HP and MP system, rarity of skill, ranking, and the holder/containers.
Main source of the 3 Fragments group.
Age: Unknown
Birthdate: Unknown
Status: Active
Gail Gnauargba, 「a Dwarven Kingdom: Dwarko
representative.」
A former Dwarven king's adviser who is assigned to represent thm in Neutral
city as one of the leaders due to his great wisdom in managing affairs, love
for his fellows, and willingness to judge. An elder dwarf who stands 3 inches
taller than a typical dwarf. He may be old for humans but still has a good
memory and instinct, he knows a little in terms in combat too. But one big
reason that he is dump in being a representative is that, he is plotting coup in
their nation. The King have known his plans without Gail noticing. He’s being carefree
sometimes that led to suspicion of the King. That may be a act of treason,
unforgivable and should be punished by impromptu decapitation, but the king
thought that it would be better to use his other talent than waste it. As the
plan is still not executed, he just thrown him to Mori Neutral City.
Likes: Peaking at maid taking a bath, spicy food, Politics, Coup d'état
Dslikes: Being looked down
Age: 969
Height: 4 1/3 ft.
Gender: Old Man
Birthdate: Scorpio 29, 3XXX (Constellian Calendar)
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Clothilde Thibault Leclair, 「a representative from Human race from Empire of Ur. 2nd Princess, daughter of Emperor Théophile Leclair and Empress Élisabeth Thibault – Leclair.」 She gave up on her competition to his siblings to become heir, and she insisted her self to become representative for Humans in Neutral city to avoid discussions of being arranged for marriage. A daring, fierce, beauty equal to none, will defy rules that she sees not worthy following. Once created and commander of her own royal order, led them once in a war, her unit were always triumphant.
Likes: Sweet foods, Swords play, Being alone
Dislikes: Wearing fancy dresses, Arrogant Men, Weakness
Age: 17
Height: 5'2 ft.
Birthdate: Capricorn 25, 3XXX (Constellian Calendar)
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Furstenberg , 「1st son of Demihuman’s Beast King in Demina, their representative in Neutral city.」Strong warrior, anda a war freak, but is forced by his father to become representative so that he won’t go insane by only thinking about war and to change his view in the world. He changed a little but, still there’s lingering of hate to humans and feeling to go to war inside him.
He's family is in tge lineage of Lion-kin. The blood lineages Kings in Beast Kingdom.
Likes: Raw meat, Fighting, War, Strong Women
Dislikes: Weak people, His ears and tail being touched, Being pat in head
Age: 369
Height: 6 ft.
Birthdate: Leo, 18 3XXX (Constellian Calendar)
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Elrand Aragorn, 「Elven Kingdom: Elvion, the representative for elven race. 」A level headed person, have a strong sense of justice but he takes it only for himself. If he see some prejudices, only when no one is looking he will act to dispose them. Elven Kings son from his 3rd Concubine, he assigned him to act as representative to shup him up, because he always try to force the talk of himself becoming the next King. His facade face hiding his true nature.
Always wants to look elegant and handsome in the eye of his people.
Likes: Politics, Books, Tea
Dislikes: Disloyalty, Dishonesty, Useless, Beans
Age: 400
Height: 5'11 ft.
Birrhdate: Aries, 3 3XXX (Constellian Calendar)
This one will be used as reference for Constellian Calendar:
Aries Dates: March 21-April 19
Taurus Dates: April 20-May 20
Gemini Dates: May 21-June 20
Cancer Dates: June 21-July 22
Leo Dates: July 23-August 22
Virgo Dates: August 23-September 22
Libra Dates: September 23-October 22
Scorpio Dates: October 23-November 21
Sagittarius Dates: November 22-December 21
Capricorn Dates: December 21-January 20
Aquarius Dates: January 21-February 18
Pisces Dates: February 19-March 20
This books, only just for fun?
To be honest the idea I quite fresh but the execution is sucks, poor development on every aspects such as characters, personal traits, personality, world views, world development, plots (all your plots is sucks and if I could gave you advice, please stop doing this forced jokes or 'FUNNY' sh*t MC personality. If he is clever just make him the serious types and have a real purposes and goals! Instead being like damaged doll and dragged to everywhere like trash. Also makes him indifferent to lives no matter what creatures even human he could kill it without being bothered by such mundane thoughts or feelings.) And your idea to married MC and the witch gurl kinda good.
At least hopefully you'd rethink my words and re-works and re-write this story.
Thanks.
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