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This books, only just for fun?
To be honest the idea I quite fresh but the execution is sucks, poor development on every aspects such as characters, personal traits, personality, world views, world development, plots (all your plots is sucks and if I could gave you advice, please stop doing this forced jokes or 'FUNNY' sh*t MC personality. If he is clever just make him the serious types and have a real purposes and goals! Instead being like damaged doll and dragged to everywhere like trash. Also makes him indifferent to lives no matter what creatures even human he could kill it without being bothered by such mundane thoughts or feelings.) And your idea to married MC and the witch gurl kinda good.
At least hopefully you'd rethink my words and re-works and re-write this story.
Thanks.
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