I wasn't sure whether or not I should review this novel because I just haven't read enough of it, but after a while I just decided I might as well review what I've read so far and warn people.

The biggest problem this book has - in the few chapters I've read - is that the reading and punctuation is terrible. While it isn't as terrible as a machine translated novel, it is terribly uncomfortable to read and after a while I had to give up.

The idea, while not entirely unique - having been a few times in different fonts before - was interesting enough to catch my attention. Unfortunately, the author didn't live up to it and I found my self seeing conflicting aspects in the story and world almost immediately. 

My review would be lower, but again, I haven't read enough on it to do so; it could get better after all.

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It looks like it has potential.

I considered this a constructive criticism and it is not necessary for the author to take this into consideration especially if he is simply writing for fun.

The world building seems unique. Especially it has a setting where women have more advantages compared to men. Other than being a fantasy world, I think it would be interesting if it would have a take on male oppression. Honestly, I find it weird that the noble structures are patriarchal (as I have seen in the early chapters), like the Duke of Rainfall, when among millions of powerful women there were only a thousands of men who are source user.

Anyway, for me the main issue is the grammar and the structure of the chapters. I agree with another user's GioBlaze9239's review regarding it. (I'm not an expert myself but if you want to improve, you may want to know other people's thoughts)

There are a lot of redundant words in one sentence, even pharagraphs are repeated.  Not exactly repeated but they were just simply conveying the same thing for example in the second chapter where the author talked about the difference between men and women.

There are wrong use of prepositions like "to" or "for". 

There was an instance where you wrote "Source of Correction" a couple of times instead of "Source of Corruption" which confused me for a second.

My advice to you is to find yourself a decent copywriter and do a quick review of every chapters.

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Maybe I am reviewing it too early because currently it has only 12 chapters, but I want to say to the Author that it has potential and the story and the world building is unique and it feels like there is more to see in this world but I don't know what Author will do with it, I hope Author will take his time and don't waste it, so please continue it and don't drop it, and yes there are some small grammar mistakes but it's also improved with chapters.

the one thing I really like that MC is not so cool and nor so weak guy and because of that I really like the MC, good work, keep working on it👍

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