MC reincarnated in TDG world as Shen Yue, the evil fiance of the city lord's daughter, Yi Zi Yun. He tried to think of ways to survive in this world as he uses his future knowledge of his family's ruin.
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I want to rate this higher, but I don't feel I can. The pacing is too fast to get invested into the story.
It basically follows the plot of TODG, except 10 chapters are condensed into 1 paragraph of "He did this, he did that and became more op".
My recommendation is to completely re-write the whole story, expanding on the details and giving birth to the characters, instead of just pulling them out of TODG.
This is supposed to be a new and different story in its own right, instead of a summary with minor changes.
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Purely based on the respect I give to Tales of Demons I can give this a blind 5 star, not to mention the idea isn't bad. It could become a pretty interesting story if there were more chapters.
The absolute main part is that it gives importance to my all time favorite character, ever, Xiao Ning'er. Ziyun is absolutely nothing in front of Ning'er tbh.
Now we just need the original author of TDG to move his ass and finish up the story.
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THIS IS A MUST READ TODAG!
As for the new readers I can tell you this is a good TODG fan-fiction... The reason it feels fast for some readers is the author does not cut and paste the canon story!... To better understand what is going on you should go read the canon story to fill in any gaps you may feel. As of when I wrote this there is 15 chapters published on this already, so just wait patently for more!
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The fanfic might feel fast because the author is skipping most things but I think that the author may slow down when where in the non-cannon part of story plus I love the MC is not perfect but good, I like the vibe of the story its pretty chill I guess, (Very recommended to read Tales of demon and gods before reading this to fill in the gaps in the story) and author please post more chaps ;-;
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This is really a great story and he will be getting all the nice waifus too especially ninger and may be r-18 too unlike the main story he may get main MC lil sister who knows but the story update is once a week with how little the chapter is that really the thing that made me rate 3 if it goes up to 3-5 chapters a week it would be a 5*
I gave a 4* becuz it is going keep it up man
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