HEY, WHERE IS MY CHEAT SYSTEM???
WHY AM I SOME NAMELESS MOB????
Can I at least have a Sharingan.......please?
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I see myself as a 'casual' naruto fan and to my disappointment, this novel is not for me.
1.) Inaccurate ninja knowledge.
In particular, is Chapter 7 [So If you open the gates you have more chakra but your body might not be able to handle that. But why can Naruto's body handle so much extra chakra from Kurama? Hmm, maybe it's because the eight gates also use the organs like letting the heart-rate go berserk so that your blood flow is extremely high?]
This is very wrong! Naruto has an immense chakra amount cuz he is an uzumaki, it is a bloodline advantage. Not to boot, Kurama is kept on an uzumaki seal that literally allows naruto to take full advantage. It can also be argued that Minato stole Kurama's negative half (I can't remember if it's yang or yin), which makes Kurama's chakra load more bearable to Naruto since Kurama's most malevolent side has been already extracted.
Meanwhile, eight gates is a specialized art that complements and boosts taijutsu users' skills. It doesn't increase chakra, it just makes it MORE explosive. If eight gates can increase chakra, then guy and lee might've been ninjutsu users too. The reason they resolved to eight gates is because of their meager chakra.
I can't believe this. I call myself a casual fan of naruto, but I know this much... this is insufferable...
Chapter 7 was irritating, so is chapter 8... Tenten has no affinities to medical ninjutsu, she specializes in bukijutsu. Tenten suddenly having this affinity in the fanfic hurts the logic of the Narutoverse. She is a weapon master whose versatility rivals heavy hitters like choji. Without doubt, Tenten is strong. I can imagine how this fanfic gets more inaccurate along with the story, so I just can't continue. In the end, I chose to drop.
I can't bear with the inaccuracies.
2.) CULTIVATION!? NOOOO, PLEASE DON"T!
Truthfully, the Narutoverse has the closest representation of the Chinese cultivation genre among the many animes I know, BUT the SHINOBI WORLD and the STAPLE CULTIVATION NOVELS have different encompassing POWER SYSTEMS! The ending of Chapter 8 is the final nail that convinced me to drop. It feels wrong to entirely new levels.
PS. This is constructive criticism and I hope that others won't take my words with hostility.
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I was bored and chose this novel randomly.
I can only say that I do not regret reading it, my neighbors sure do, but I don't.
It's been very entertaining so far. The MC isn't "godlike from birth" like a lot of weird fanfics, but rather very normal in both strength and knowledge. We have a lot of appropriate humor and original content.
I'll give this a 5stars to support it.
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I read from this story only have 2-3 chapter, and I really enjoy this one with another 4 series from 4 different author.
The joke, its really resemble how my father do his prank in his early years. Another things is about eiji himself, who is literally anoyying person but draw other to him lol
Another one best about this story is the cover. Author even bother himself to put commision for it, showing how much he care about his own work.. Other than many author that just pick random picture from google.
Entertain reader ? Check
Passion in writing ? Check
Joke that make you laugh happily and imagine yourself seeing the scene directly ? Check, for me.
100% worth reading
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I love how he isnt too involved with the main characters.
Hayate's description of him being a good guy "Doesnt have grand goals of trying to protect the world, but looks out for those close to him" is what makes this novel so enjoyable to read.
I personally want him to develop his relationship with Tenten.
Everything except the gang thing which occurred midway.. I found enjoyable.I absolutely want more chapters
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A fanfic that makes sense. But it has as many fillers as Naruto. The writing and story is good. Read it if you like Naruto.
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It is simply too funny. I always have a great time reading every chapther
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i realy like the relaxed storytelling it goes perfectly with the MC. It is also a very refreshing take on the mostly OP MC naruto fanfics.
i realy hope you dont drop this for a while
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Super good so far.
Initially didnt like the gang stuff at the beginning, but don't worry that sh*t is over fast.
It's a really funny novel which seems to have started out as a joke (which was still good) but the author is putting more thought into the plot as chapters continue and it seems the MC is getting a direction in which to go to.
100% worth reading.
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The author knows how to make someone laugh. Both the original Narutu's and his characters are funny and intriguing. I'm really hyped for the rest of the story
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A good fanfiction that has Gintama's narrative style. If you want to read a solid yet humorous fanfiction, I think this is what you need.
At times, a ridiculous theme unexpectably kicks in, other times a serious and sorrowful one. I don't know if this is author's first novel but except for the little details, of which I don't even remember the most of, there is not much to criticize, especially the later chapters.
So overall, I think you'll like it if you like funky characters and Naruto universe in general
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