The writing while certainly readable, is very strained. I suspect the author is not a native English speaker, causing problems with grammar and idiom.

The presentation is a very basic isekai. Main Character reincarnates to a game like world. Main Character has some serious cheat abilities. Main character deals with villains while trying to keep a low profile. It's run of the mill stuff you can probably predict most of what happens well before you actually read it.

This one is both a giant problem and why makes the novel so enjoyable for me. EVERYONE IN IT MUST HAVE BEEN DROPPED ON THEIR HEADS MULTIPLE TIMES AS CHILDREN. I mean they are all horrifically stupid and arrogant. The characters don't just buy trouble for themselves, they buy it in COSTCO sized bulk lots. Nobody ever asks the question what comes next ? Or gee that sounds like a good plan.

You read it and you can't stop because you want to know what stupid and ridiculous thing is going to happen next.

Best suggestion read a few chapters, if you are laughing read more.

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Melisent

Status: transported to the body of...

Mar 8, 2020

MC is ret*rd, OP magic so useless on it. I loved novel at its start, later is a mess

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Lakuru

Status: Presentations

Feb 11, 2020

For the love of god, you are stalling the story so much it is actually annoying. You spent more then 10 chapters or something describing like a few events. 10 CHAPTERS about her changing her identity all the way to her leaving. Do you love prolonging the story this much? We already knew she was going to leave from almost the beginning of the story and you just wasted our time on these pointless chapters that could have been story progression. I'll at least give it 5 chapters at most if I'm being generous to get through all this filler (Yes I'm calling it filler because we don't care about 90% of what u wrote up to this point).

The only important part of what I read up to this point is:

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1. Guy gets reincarnated into a girl, learn magic, then gets betrayed.

2. Girl goes to city, befriends a prostitute (who for some reason the MC is overly nice too?) Then gets captured, kills a few people (i think) and escapes.

3. Then she plans to leave the city all of which could be described in 1-2 chapters to just get the story moving.

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Pretty much my whole rant up until the chapter I left off on is about how you wrote too many chapters for very small time events that don't need that much chapters to write about. We already know shes leaving but am I reading 10 chapters all about her leaving? JUST LET HER LEAVE and get on with it.

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Cavler

Status: extra ii

Oct 23, 2022

The story itself is good. The beginning is a little cliche, but soon becomes it's own thing.

This story does have some dark/gory themes, but overal it adheres to the tags.

Lastly the grammar is often wrongly translated and can make bits confusing. (Like when the story says something like lets have coffee, they mean breakfast most of the time) but if you can overlook this, then the story itself is good and in my opinion worth the read.

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mon5y-san

Status: chapter 101 – did i get to...

Nov 16, 2020

writing is improving. Pacing is good.

characters have stoke of intelligent sometime too.

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old review (ch101)

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it's so bad that it's good.

this is MC we are dealing with

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dying adventurer girl got out of worm's stomach. MC try to use heal.

"Your breasts weren't too big or too small, maybe it's the right size? The nipples of her breasts are pink and beautiful, my desire to brush them right there was flowing inside me, but I didn't do that."

this is what's going on in mc's head during that time

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absolutely trash-tier isekai

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-MC is psycho who get pleasure from hunting monsters and like to make humans who are theat to her face gluesome deaths

-MC is stupid. Low IQ and low EQ (rock fallen from sky is most powerful magic you think off? Aren't you otaku?

-that also goes for denizens of this world.

-MC is most charming and pretty 10yr loli in the world. Yep that troupe.

-hate being view with lust by others. But he himself always do that.

-magic is being magically snowflake. Work certain way and not sometime (can't do appraissal but invisible drone from wind magic and ct scanner with brain as image proccessor are possible)

i refuse to ackownledge MC as girl

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grammer is a mess. He, she, it are use intangible without any consideration

everything combine made this an enjoyable comedy novel.

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meow_neko

Status: c0

Jun 4, 2020

i personaliy love it, and I recommed you read it to see if you will like it too, I happen to find the details to be extremly enjoyable and funny at times

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Icey_Immortal

Status: transported to the body of...

Apr 28, 2020

I enjoy this story. The grammar is an issue but when your brain just corrects it without you noticing, there isn't a problem. Wish more chapters were released a week though. The action in this novel is back to back with minor breather time in the middle. Its hard to get bored

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