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Word Count: | 319,361 |
Average Words: | 3,943 |
Pages: | 1,162 |
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I like this story.
There are some issues with the language, grammar issues, spelling mistakes and so on. The text is still readable and I can follow the story just fine. My guess is that the writer does not have English as a first language, so I can forgive those mistakes.
I think the author went a little overboard making the protagonist an antihero, but I have seen worse and can live with it.
I have some issues with how the protagonist copes with stuff, how he reacts and so on, it doesn't feel completely believable to me at times. This is a personal opinion though and kind of is up to the author, since he is writing a character that is more than human in most ways.
I do like that the protagonist is dark, but the author hasn't fallen into the trap of making the character a complete lunatic that goes on murdering rampages.
All in all I think it's a pretty solid story despite some flaws and I wouldn't mind reading more of it.
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Pretty good so far. Will do a better review with more chapters.
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great story with great beginning
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