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Although this story looks promising, I just can't overlook the rampant grammar/spelling errors. I understand if the author is not a native English speaker or someone who has difficulty with this strange patchwork of a language; however, they really need an editor to check this stuff. Badly. I can handle a certain amount of issues but even having only read to chapter 3 I can already count more than 30 obvious errors and it's really grinding my reading process down to a halt. Will pick back up if these concerns are addressed/fixed.
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If you like an epic story with some good explicit yuri, this is for you. The author is really skilled to balance adventures, character developement through their bonds and of course the Yuri scenes.
I won't write further to avoid spoilers, just read it.
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I found it a decent read up to chapter 11. I could see where it was heading in an earlier chapter but the acceptance and interaction of the two MC at the start just doesn't make any sense things happened to fast and things contradictory to previous developed personalities and desires. Their is no meat to fully describe the situation at this point that should cause a bit of drama and a hurdle for them to get over.
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