Diary of Other-Worldly King
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| Word Count: | 42,466 |
| Average Words: | 1,769 |
| Pages: | 155 |
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- (16) Page-14 of Diary: The quiet before the stormAug 15, 2020
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- (13) Page-12 of Diary: Horned RabbitsAug 7, 2020
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The whole story feels very forced. It feels less like he is using his skills as along and more like his skills are using Him. This is especially obvious in the begining of the story. The large amount of skills aren't really a problem, so much as how they are displayed. The skills don't need to have the experience displayed, and it makes it feel very cluttered. It was way too much to read, they really only need to be made known if they level up, and maybe at the end of a chapter. Also, when doing an accelerated story, the experience needed to level up him or his skills is way too high for a normal person, let alone the MC. The story is good, except that it is very fast. Try slowing down the plot, and maybe fill it with more interactions with the characters. Try to develop the harem members more before they officially become harem members. Thanks for the invite
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