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Word Count: | 41,420 |
Average Words: | 1,183 |
Pages: | 151 |
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Writing - 4.5/5. Pretty good, not much grammatical mistakes. The style is pretty neat as well. Bonus marks for illustrations.
Story - 2/5. Plot holes, way too many plot holes. MC used to be a top player before the game stopped being a game. And then ended up getting ass-whooped by some what should be some low/mid-level mobs? And then wordt of all, the MC didn't know about what should had been a basic mechanic while being a top player. Seriously?
Characters: 2.5/5. Generic personalities. MC's sister is a cliche loving-cutesy imouto and the MC herself is god damned pathetic. All other characters feel bland.
Final rating: 3/5
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f**king amazing. The only thing I regret is not finding this sooner.
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Great Story!!
A must Read for those who enjoy Fluffy Content. This is probably one of my favorite stories on this website, READ IT.
I'm just waiting for the next Chapter to come.
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I love this Story with good Characters and cant wait for more
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This is what they call a "fluffy" story. Characters are overly simple. There is almost no seriousness. Everyone is extra pretty, including the males.
Also, there seems to be an author-tranny fantasy theme going on.
It's definitely not my cup of tea. I'll stick with Yorkshire - a proper brew.
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